Review of the Review- by Kamala D and Spinfly
To the reviewer of “A Few Good Men”; Your review is the crappiest crap that ever crapped. I would have farted in your face, but I never got the chance, so instead, I will blow raspberries in your general direction; Phhhbt! Phhhbt! Phhhbt! I hate your face, you smell like butt, dut dut dut.
And I don’t lerve you….ass…………………. Johnson.
And that is my review of your review.
And I don’t lerve you….ass…………………. Johnson.
And that is my review of your review.
posted by Spinfly at 6:49 PM
6 Comments:
Ladies,
I hope you sent this to him at the Rapid City Journal. If you need any help figuring out how to do it, let me know. B. Owl. F.
Of course, before you send it you might want to round it out a little. That should be easy enough
don't you think?
round it out?
We always felt as such, it's the fact that there was neither negative nor positive contained within. If I do something, I would like to know if I did well or not so I can be proud of what I have done if it is a good review. Or I can work on whatever he decided to comment on. Either way, I will strive to be a better actor. I would just like to know what to do to further myself. One part that really bugs me is the fact that he never ever mentions anything about how my character actually is. This leads me to believe that he never paid any attention at all. It's like being a food critic and talking about how it looked without actually eating anything. Pay attention to what you're reviewing or review something else...... I suppose it was just my time for a rant. I feel better now.
Relieved D
Yeah Chop, Kam, Spin,
That's what I mean by "rounding
it out. " First, tell him how bad his review was,
then give him a number of examples why,
then show him what he should have said
then tell him how bad he sucks again.
You know, round it out.
But keep the attitude, Kam and Spin
it's hilarious and fun to read.
Send it to him in an email by going to
RapidCityJournal.com and clicking on
"contact us." You'll find the writer's
email address there.
Go ahead, teach the punk how to write.
He's getting paid.
He should do a better job.
By the way D. You could not have done
your role any better, and I'm not the only
one who thinks so.
Here's to handling all your upcoming roles so well.
That will be the hard part.
Thanks Popski
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